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Author: | filler [ Sat Feb 04, 2017 2:29 pm ] |
Post subject: | Script feedback |
A comment on this video from a couple weeks ago points out a grammar mistake. Turns out "especially" is an adverb. https://youtu.be/uUweDyLIC_s |
Author: | filler [ Sat Feb 04, 2017 2:42 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Script feedback |
I noticed another small thing while watching the video. When Zenki meets Shiguma, Shiguma says, "when clad in this armor my strength is equivalent to that of a God." In this instance, "god" in not being used as a name (like "I spoke to God") so it's not a proper noun and should not be capitalized. |
Author: | taskforce [ Thu Feb 16, 2017 11:57 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Script feedback |
Thought I replied to this. Thanks for the finds Filler, I thought I had changed that to unusually but guess I forgot or it got lost in the wash when I had to restore a backup text file at one point. I know I had fixed that god at one point as it was pointed out in beta. I'll get that and the Iria final patch with the bomb fix out soon. |
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