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Author:  filler [ Sat Feb 04, 2017 2:29 pm ]
Post subject:  Script feedback

A comment on this video from a couple weeks ago points out a grammar mistake. Turns out "especially" is an adverb. https://youtu.be/uUweDyLIC_s

Author:  filler [ Sat Feb 04, 2017 2:42 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Script feedback

I noticed another small thing while watching the video. When Zenki meets Shiguma, Shiguma says, "when clad in this armor my strength is equivalent to that of a God."

In this instance, "god" in not being used as a name (like "I spoke to God") so it's not a proper noun and should not be capitalized.

Author:  taskforce [ Thu Feb 16, 2017 11:57 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Script feedback

Thought I replied to this. Thanks for the finds Filler, I thought I had changed that to unusually but guess I forgot or it got lost in the wash when I had to restore a backup text file at one point. I know I had fixed that god at one point as it was pointed out in beta. I'll get that and the Iria final patch with the bomb fix out soon.

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