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PostPosted: Sat Feb 04, 2017 2:29 pm 
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A comment on this video from a couple weeks ago points out a grammar mistake. Turns out "especially" is an adverb. https://youtu.be/uUweDyLIC_s


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I noticed another small thing while watching the video. When Zenki meets Shiguma, Shiguma says, "when clad in this armor my strength is equivalent to that of a God."

In this instance, "god" in not being used as a name (like "I spoke to God") so it's not a proper noun and should not be capitalized.


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Thought I replied to this. Thanks for the finds Filler, I thought I had changed that to unusually but guess I forgot or it got lost in the wash when I had to restore a backup text file at one point. I know I had fixed that god at one point as it was pointed out in beta. I'll get that and the Iria final patch with the bomb fix out soon.


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