I had a few minutes to try it before I went to do things, let's see:
1. "Cure All" battle message
Is fixed!
2. "Flap Flap" battle message
Im past that part of the game with both save files, but seeing how Cure All is fixed, this has to be ok too!
3. The period on the wrong line in the hospital when someone is "Sick"
Fixed too. It also sounds a little more in tone with the exclamation point.
4. The "Twin Claw" skill is showing now that only one enemy may be struck.
Fixed too, but I don't have a screen for it. It shows "x1.5 Damage, One".
5. Poyon's "Random Link" returns the party to "The Last Town" while in battle
Fixed too, same text as your screenshot.
Lastly, I saw another small issue with an item's description: The Spark herb:
The game says "Causes Sleep" yet when using it, it's a thunder element attack for a single enemy.
That's all i've seen for now, and sorry for the inconvenience.