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Post subject: Spot Translation Request
PostPosted: Thu May 22, 2014 4:29 pm 
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This is block segment of seventeen consecutive strings that we overlooked. It's not really that long, but it's lengthier than the usual stray string or two that I can handle in context with surrounding action.

FYI, everything I write on this Aretha board will likely be a spoiler. Don't read my project coordination posts if you dislike spoilers. For those following the project, it's going well.

The needed segment comes deep into the story after the heroine and her companions have visited a half-dozen towns and crossed several seas. She is searching for her grandmother and also her mother's heirloom ring, stolen by an old man on a mountaintop, shortly before her grandmother was kidnapped and her house was destroyed. Before the old man left the heroine to die in a blocked cave on the mountain, he claimed the ring was the lost "Aretha Ring".

Having arrived in the ancient land of the former Aretha Kingdom, the heroine finds the whole countryside occupied by an evil empire whose minions are also searching for the Aretha Ring. Taken into custody, the heroine escapes a dungeon and eventually is sheltered by a young swordsman. After several more skirmishes with the empire's troops, to escape this land, the heroine and her companions stowaway aboard a ship. Later they get hungry and decide to search for food. This is the point where we need additional translations. I imagine the story continues onward with the food search and possible detection by the ship's crew.

These seventeen strings also complete the block.

Many thanks!

;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_00000C28:
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]「[PINK][Name$05][WHITE]![X=$07]ハラへったぞ!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]「そうだな・・・その辺に食料があるだろ、さがしてみろよ!!

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK][Name$03]:[WHITE][SHOW] I'm hungry, [PINK][Name$05][WHITE]![KEYP]
[clrs][HIDE][PINK][Name$05]:[WHITE][SHOW] Yeah... Let's sneak around
and look for some food!
.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_00000C9F:
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「本当に何日もこんな生活しなきゃならないの・・・?[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]「あぁ![X=$07]しばらくのしんぼうさっ![X=$07]それにそのうち慣れるよ!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「そんなァ~![X=$07]私、慣れたくなァ~い!!

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「本当に何日もこんな生活しなきゃならないの・・・?[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]「あぁ![X=$07]しばらくのしんぼうさっ![X=$07]それにそのうち慣れるよ!![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「そんなァ~![X=$07]私、慣れたくなァ~い!!
.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_00000D66:
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]「お~い![X=$07][PINK][Name$01][WHITE]~!!

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]「お~い![X=$07][PINK][Name$01][WHITE]~!!
.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_00000D97:
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「[PINK][Name$03][WHITE]・・・?[X=$07]どうしたの!?

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「[PINK][Name$03][WHITE]・・・?[X=$07]どうしたの!?
.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_00000DCA:
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]「ごめん・・・。[X=$07]見つかっちゃった・・・。[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]「なにぃ!?

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]「ごめん・・・。[X=$07]見つかっちゃった・・・。[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]「なにぃ!?
.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_00000E55:
; [HIDE][PINK]船乗り[WHITE][SHOW]「おめーら![X=$07]おとなしくするだーよ!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]「ちっ![X=$07]しまった!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「どうなるの・・・?[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]「さぁ・・・。[X=$07]おとなしくした方が身のためだな、こりゃ・・・。[KEYP][CLRS][HIDE][PINK]船乗り[WHITE][SHOW]「ごちゃごちゃ言ってねーで、こっちさ来い!!

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK]船乗り[WHITE][SHOW]「おめーら![X=$07]おとなしくするだーよ!![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]「ちっ![X=$07]しまった!![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「どうなるの・・・?[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]「さぁ・・・。[X=$07]おとなしくした方が身のためだな、こりゃ・・・。[KEYP][CLRS][HIDE][PINK]船乗り[WHITE][SHOW]「ごちゃごちゃ言ってねーで、こっちさ来い!!
.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_00001000:
; [HIDE][PINK]船長[WHITE][SHOW]「オレの船に密航するとは、いい度胸だ!![KEYP][NEWL]
; 「さて![X=$07]どうしてくれよう・・・?[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]「すまない![X=$07]悪気はなかったんだ・・・。[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK]船乗り[WHITE][SHOW]「あやまってすむと思ってんのか!?[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK]船乗り[WHITE][SHOW]「すまきだ![X=$07]すまき!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK]船乗り[WHITE][SHOW]「サメのエサにしちまえ!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK]船乗り[WHITE][SHOW]「そーだ![X=$07]そーだ!!

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK]船長[WHITE][SHOW]「オレの船に密航するとは、いい度胸だ!![KEYP]
「さて![X=$07]どうしてくれよう・・・?[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]「すまない![X=$07]悪気はなかったんだ・・・。[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK]船乗り[WHITE][SHOW]「あやまってすむと思ってんのか!?[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK]船乗り[WHITE][SHOW]「すまきだ![X=$07]すまき!![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK]船乗り[WHITE][SHOW]「サメのエサにしちまえ!![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK]船乗り[WHITE][SHOW]「そーだ![X=$07]そーだ!!
.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_00001161:
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]「オホン![X=$07]何のさわぎですかな?

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]「オホン![X=$07]何のさわぎですかな?
.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_000011B4:
; [HIDE][PINK]船長[WHITE][SHOW]「こ、これは伯爵様!![KEYP][NEWL]
; 「いえ、密航者を発見しまして、それで、どうするかを決めているところなんですよ。[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]「密航者・・・?[KEYP][NEWL]
;

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK]船長[WHITE][SHOW]「こ、これは伯爵様!![KEYP]
「いえ、密航者を発見しまして、それで、どうするかを決めているところなんですよ。[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]「密航者・・・?[KEYP]

.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_0000124C:
; 「おや![X=$07]これは、おじょうさん!![X=$07]またお会いしましたね!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「あ、あなたは・・・!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]「キザ伯爵!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]「オ~![X=$07]おじょうさん!![X=$07]まさかあなたが密航者だとは・・・。[KEYP][NEWL]
; 「あなたのような美しき女性に、そのようないやしきことはにあいませぬ!![KEYP][NEWL]
; 「騎士とは、つねに美しきご婦人のために力をつくすもの!![KEYP][NEWL]
; 「どうか、この[PINK][Name$09][WHITE]めに、おまかせあれ!![KEYP][NEWL]
;

.TEXT
「おや![X=$07]これは、おじょうさん!![X=$07]またお会いしましたね!![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「あ、あなたは・・・!![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]「キザ伯爵!![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]「オ~![X=$07]おじょうさん!![X=$07]まさかあなたが密航者だとは・・・。[KEYP]
「あなたのような美しき女性に、そのようないやしきことはにあいませぬ!![KEYP]
「騎士とは、つねに美しきご婦人のために力をつくすもの!![KEYP]
「どうか、この[PINK][Name$09][WHITE]めに、おまかせあれ!![KEYP]

.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_000013C3:
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE]「・・・・。[NEWL]
; [PINK][Name$05][WHITE]「・・・・。[NEWL]
; [PINK]一同[WHITE]「・・・・[SHOW]。[KEYP][NEWL]
;

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE]「・・・・。
[PINK][Name$05][WHITE]「・・・・。
[PINK]一同[WHITE]「・・・・[SHOW]。[KEYP]

.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_00001401:
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]「[PINK]船長[WHITE]![X=$07]このおじょうさんと、連れの者たちの料金は私がはらいましょう![X=$07]それで許していただけませんかな?[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK]船長[WHITE][SHOW]「し、しかし、示しがつきませんし・・・。[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]「わかりました![X=$07]3倍はらいましょう!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK]船長[WHITE]「3倍![SHOW]?[WAIT$20][X=$07]わ、わかりました![X=$07]そりゃぁ![X=$07]もう!![KEYP][NEWL]
;

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]「[PINK]船長[WHITE]![X=$07]このおじょうさんと、連れの者たちの料金は私がはらいましょう![X=$07]それで許していただけませんかな?[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK]船長[WHITE][SHOW]「し、しかし、示しがつきませんし・・・。[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]「わかりました![X=$07]3倍はらいましょう!![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK]船長[WHITE]「3倍![SHOW]?[WAIT$20][X=$07]わ、わかりました![X=$07]そりゃぁ![X=$07]もう!![KEYP]

.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_00001539:
; 「オイ![X=$07]テメーら!![X=$07]なにボーっとしてやんでぇ!![X=$07]早くみなさんを自由にしてやらねえか!!

.TEXT
「オイ![X=$07]テメーら!![X=$07]なにボーっとしてやんでぇ!![X=$07]早くみなさんを自由にしてやらねえか!!
.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_000015CE:
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「ありがとうございました!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]「イヤ~![X=$07]なに、当然の事をしたまでです!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]「フン![X=$07]キザヤロー!![KEYP][NEWL]
;

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「ありがとうございました!![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]「イヤ~![X=$07]なに、当然の事をしたまでです!![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]「フン![X=$07]キザヤロー!![KEYP]

.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_0000164B:
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「[PINK][Name$03][WHITE]!![KEYP][NEWL]
;

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「[PINK][Name$03][WHITE]!![KEYP]

.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_0000166F:
; 「ごめんなさい!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]「イヤ![X=$07]イヤ!![X=$07]元気があってよろしい。[KEYP][NEWL]
; 「ところで、ものは相談ですが、この先、ごいっしょさせていただいてよろしいですかな?[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「ハイ![X=$07]こちらこそよろしくお願いします。[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]「そーですか!![KEYP][NEWL]
; 「イヤー![X=$07]光栄のきわみですナァ!![KEYP][NEWL]
; 「それでは、ラウンジでお茶にでもいたしましょう!!

.TEXT
「ごめんなさい!![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]「イヤ![X=$07]イヤ!![X=$07]元気があってよろしい。[KEYP]
「ところで、ものは相談ですが、この先、ごいっしょさせていただいてよろしいですかな?[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「ハイ![X=$07]こちらこそよろしくお願いします。[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]「そーですか!![KEYP]
「イヤー![X=$07]光栄のきわみですナァ!![KEYP]
「それでは、ラウンジでお茶にでもいたしましょう!!
.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_000017D7:
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]「どーした![X=$07][PINK][Name$05][WHITE]!?[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]「フン![X=$07]いけすかん!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]「へー![X=$07]おいら達、気が合いそうだな!!

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]「どーした![X=$07][PINK][Name$05][WHITE]!?[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]「フン![X=$07]いけすかん!![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]「へー![X=$07]おいら達、気が合いそうだな!!
.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_000018DA:
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]「これからどうするんだ?[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「[PINK][Name$06][WHITE]さんに、[BLUE]バンギ砂漠[WHITE]の[BLUE]砂の城[WHITE]について聞いてみようと思うの。[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]「[PINK][Name$06][WHITE]か!![KEYP][NEWL]
; 「よし![X=$07]行こう行こう!!

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]「これからどうするんだ?[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「[PINK][Name$06][WHITE]さんに、[BLUE]バンギ砂漠[WHITE]の[BLUE]砂の城[WHITE]について聞いてみようと思うの。[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]「[PINK][Name$06][WHITE]か!![KEYP]
「よし![X=$07]行こう行こう!!
.ENDT


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PostPosted: Sun May 25, 2014 8:41 pm 
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I translated a bit of this. I'll try doing the rest later today if no one else does.

;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_00000C28:
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]「[PINK][Name$05][WHITE]![X=$07]ハラへったぞ!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]「そうだな・・・その辺に食料があるだろ、さがしてみろよ!!

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK][Name$03]:[WHITE][SHOW] I'm hungry, [PINK][Name$05][WHITE]![KEYP]
[clrs][HIDE][PINK][Name$05]:[WHITE][SHOW] Yeah... Let's sneak around
and look for some food!
.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_00000C9F:
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「本当に何日もこんな生活しなきゃならないの・・・?[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]「あぁ![X=$07]しばらくのしんぼうさっ![X=$07]それにそのうち慣れるよ!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「そんなァ~![X=$07]私、慣れたくなァ~い!!

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]Do we really have to live like this for days and days...?[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]Come on! [X=$07]Just try to hang in there![X=$07]Besides, you'll get used to it eventually!![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]N-no way![X=$07]I DON'T WANNA get used to it!
.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_00000D66:
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]「お~い![X=$07][PINK][Name$01][WHITE]~!!

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]HEY![X=$07][PINK][Name$01][WHITE]!!
.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_00000D97:
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「[PINK][Name$03][WHITE]・・・?[X=$07]どうしたの!?

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW][PINK][Name$03][WHITE]...?[X=$07]What is it?!
.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_00000DCA:
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]「ごめん・・・。[X=$07]見つかっちゃった・・・。[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]「なにぃ!?

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]Sorry...[X=$07]We've been found...[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]What?!
.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_00000E55:
; [HIDE][PINK]船乗り[WHITE][SHOW]「おめーら![X=$07]おとなしくするだーよ!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]「ちっ![X=$07]しまった!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「どうなるの・・・?[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]「さぁ・・・。[X=$07]おとなしくした方が身のためだな、こりゃ・・・。[KEYP][CLRS][HIDE][PINK]船乗り[WHITE][SHOW]「ごちゃごちゃ言ってねーで、こっちさ来い!!

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK]Sailor:[WHITE][SHOW]You![X=$07]You'd best give yourselves up![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]Damn![X=$07]We've been caught![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]What'll happen to us...?[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]I don't know...[X=$07]I guess we'd better do as he says...[KEYP][CLRS][HIDE][PINK]Sailor:[WHITE][SHOW]Quit yer blatherin' and come with me!
.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_00001000:
; [HIDE][PINK]船長[WHITE][SHOW]「オレの船に密航するとは、いい度胸だ!![KEYP][NEWL]
; 「さて![X=$07]どうしてくれよう・・・?[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]「すまない![X=$07]悪気はなかったんだ・・・。[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK]船乗り[WHITE][SHOW]「あやまってすむと思ってんのか!?[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK]船乗り[WHITE][SHOW]「すまきだ![X=$07]すまき!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK]船乗り[WHITE][SHOW]「サメのエサにしちまえ!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK]船乗り[WHITE][SHOW]「そーだ![X=$07]そーだ!!

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK]Captain:[WHITE][SHOW]You've got a lotta nerve stowing away on my ship!![KEYP]
So![X=$07]What shall we do with you...?[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]I'm sorry![X=$07]We meant no harm...[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK]Sailor:[WHITE][SHOW]You think you can get off with an apology?![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK]Sailor:[WHITE][SHOW]Sumaki![X=$07]Sumaki!![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK]Sailor:[WHITE][SHOW]Turn 'em into shark food![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK]Sailor:[WHITE][SHOW]Yeah![X=$07]Yeah!
.ENDT

//Note: Sumaki is a Japanese punishment where the victim is rolled up in a bamboo mat and thrown into water. I suggest replacing it with keelhauling.


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Thanks, Eien! That interesting bamboo mat punishment is a real trip! In all of my seafaring years, I never heard about it until now (of course bread and water in the brig is considered a harsh outcome in our modern American navy). Yep, keelhauling (for crew) or throwing people overboard (enemies) ("walking a plank") are close Western equivalents in history. The former procedure was frequently fatal quickly (by drowning or the shock of being nearly skinned alive). The latter could be a lingering death sentence.


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PostPosted: Mon May 26, 2014 2:01 am 
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No problem! The bamboo mat thing was mainly used in the Edo period. I couldn't find anything on it that wasn't a dictionary entry, though. I only knew about it because in the Slayers PC98 game, Lina Inverse does it to some enemies.

Anyway, here's the rest of the text. It sounds like some noble saves the main character's party and makes friends/hooks up with one of the party members. Sounds like someone really hates the noble, but I'm not sure who or why. :lol:

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; [HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]「オホン![X=$07]何のさわぎですかな?

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]Ahem![X=$07]What's all this ruckus?
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_String_000011B4:
; [HIDE][PINK]船長[WHITE][SHOW]「こ、これは伯爵様!![KEYP][NEWL]
; 「いえ、密航者を発見しまして、それで、どうするかを決めているところなんですよ。[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]「密航者・・・?[KEYP][NEWL]
;

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK]Captain:[WHITE][SHOW]I-it's the count![KEYP]
Uh, we found some stowaways and were just deciding what to do with them.[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]Stowaways?[KEYP]

.ENDT



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_String_0000124C:
; 「おや![X=$07]これは、おじょうさん!![X=$07]またお会いしましたね!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「あ、あなたは・・・!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]「キザ伯爵!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]「オ~![X=$07]おじょうさん!![X=$07]まさかあなたが密航者だとは・・・。[KEYP][NEWL]
; 「あなたのような美しき女性に、そのようないやしきことはにあいませぬ!![KEYP][NEWL]
; 「騎士とは、つねに美しきご婦人のために力をつくすもの!![KEYP][NEWL]
; 「どうか、この[PINK][Name$09][WHITE]めに、おまかせあれ!![KEYP][NEWL]
;

.TEXT
Oh![X=$07]It's you, young lady![X=$07]So we meet again![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]Y-you're...!![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]Count Kiza![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]Oh! [X=$07]Young lady!! [X=$07]You aren't one of the stowaways, now are you...?[KEYP]
Such a vile act does not suit a gorgeous young woman like yourself!![KEYP]
As a knight, I will always do all I can for a beautiful woman!![KEYP]
Please just leave everything to [PINK][Name$09][WHITE]!![KEYP]

.ENDTk


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; [HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE]「・・・・。[NEWL]
; [PINK][Name$05][WHITE]「・・・・。[NEWL]
; [PINK]一同[WHITE]「・・・・[SHOW]。[KEYP][NEWL]
;

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE]......
[PINK][Name$05][WHITE]......
[PINK]All:[WHITE]......[SHOW] [KEYP]

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;######################;
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_String_00001401:
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]「[PINK]船長[WHITE]![X=$07]このおじょうさんと、連れの者たちの料金は私がはらいましょう![X=$07]それで許していただけませんかな?[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK]船長[WHITE][SHOW]「し、しかし、示しがつきませんし・・・。[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]「わかりました![X=$07]3倍はらいましょう!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK]船長[WHITE]「3倍![SHOW]?[WAIT$20][X=$07]わ、わかりました![X=$07]そりゃぁ![X=$07]もう!![KEYP][NEWL]
;

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW][PINK]Captain[WHITE]! [X=$07]I shall pay the fare for this young lady and her companions! [X=$07]So won't you forgive them?[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK]Captain:[WHITE][SHOW]B-but it will set a bad example...[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]Very well! [X=$07]I shall pay triple their fare!![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK]Captain:[WHITE]Triple?[SHOW]![WAIT$20][X=$07]I-I see![X=$07]Okay! [X=$07]Hold it![KEYP]

.ENDT



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_String_00001539:
; 「オイ![X=$07]テメーら!![X=$07]なにボーっとしてやんでぇ!![X=$07]早くみなさんを自由にしてやらねえか!!

.TEXT
HEY![X=$07]You guys!![X=$07]Hello? Anyone home?!![X=$07]Hurry up and set them free right now!!
.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_000015CE:
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「ありがとうございました!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]「イヤ~![X=$07]なに、当然の事をしたまでです!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]「フン![X=$07]キザヤロー!![KEYP][NEWL]
;

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]Thank you so much!![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]It was nothing! [X=$07]Why, I only did what was natural!![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]Hmph! [X=$07]Kiza, you @#$%^&*!![KEYP]

.ENDT



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_String_0000164B:
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「[PINK][Name$03][WHITE]!![KEYP][NEWL]
;

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW][PINK][Name$03][WHITE]!![KEYP]

.ENDT



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_String_0000166F:
; 「ごめんなさい!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]「イヤ![X=$07]イヤ!![X=$07]元気があってよろしい。[KEYP][NEWL]
; 「ところで、ものは相談ですが、この先、ごいっしょさせていただいてよろしいですかな?[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「ハイ![X=$07]こちらこそよろしくお願いします。[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]「そーですか!![KEYP][NEWL]
; 「イヤー![X=$07]光栄のきわみですナァ!![KEYP][NEWL]
; 「それでは、ラウンジでお茶にでもいたしましょう!!

.TEXT
I'm so sorry!![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]No! [X=$07]No!! [X=$07]It's good to have such energy.[KEYP]
By the way, I have something to ask of you. Would you mind if I join you from this point on?[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]Sure! [X=$07]It's such a pleasure to meet you![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$09][WHITE][SHOW]Oh, is that so?!![KEYP]
No, no! [X=$07]I'm extremely honored to meet you![KEYP]
Say, why don't we have a spot of tea in the lounge?!!
.ENDT



;######################;
; Declared Text String ;
;######################;
_String_000017D7:
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]「どーした![X=$07][PINK][Name$05][WHITE]!?[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]「フン![X=$07]いけすかん!![KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]「へー![X=$07]おいら達、気が合いそうだな!!

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]What was that?![X=$07][PINK][Name$05][WHITE]?![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]Hmph![X=$07]That creep![KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]Huh?![X=$07]I think we'll get along quite well!!
.ENDT



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_String_000018DA:
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]「これからどうするんだ?[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]「[PINK][Name$06][WHITE]さんに、[BLUE]バンギ砂漠[WHITE]の[BLUE]砂の城[WHITE]について聞いてみようと思うの。[KEYP][NEWL]
; [HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW]「[PINK][Name$06][WHITE]か!![KEYP][NEWL]
; 「よし![X=$07]行こう行こう!!

.TEXT
[HIDE][PINK][Name$05][WHITE][SHOW]What should we do now?[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$01][WHITE][SHOW]I think we should ask [PINK][Name$06][WHITE] about the [BLUE]Castle of Sand[WHITE] in [BLUE]Bangi Desert[WHITE].[KEYP]
[HIDE][PINK][Name$03][WHITE][SHOW][PINK][Name$06][WHITE]?!![KEYP]
Okay! [X=$07]Let's go, let's go!!
.ENDT


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PostPosted: Mon May 26, 2014 7:14 am 
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Again, we appreciate the assistance! Thanks!

Yep that dubious noble is a trip! This is turning into one of the best scenes in the game thus far. He's the character, Earl Dalahide, a randy "crazy uncle" type who never stops pawing young ladies in the park!

Carl and Fang despise him, Fang because he's overly protective and Carl because he's "interested" in Ariel. Really funny moments ensue as Dalahide comes and goes... (I've worked ahead.) Ariel appreciates "Dalah's" help, while the other companions fume and mutter in the background, spouting caustic comments occasionally, but she's very adroit at fending off his advances while insisting that the "lads" apologize to the earl, an older fellow. Dang, this game is turning out to be a lot more fun than reading the script indicated, even though Filler put a lot of verve into his reading, as always. The palette is beautiful. The music tracks are adequate to the story's changing moods. Can't stop humming one of 'em - driving me nuts!!

Eien, nice talking to you, and thanks again!

If you happen to run across someone who has some time and inclination, we are still hoping to find a primary translator for Super Shell Monsters-II in the near future (Daikaijyu Monogatari-II). Putting this patch together should proceed fairly quickly. Motivation is high, and the timing is good for us.


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PostPosted: Mon May 26, 2014 7:09 pm 
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Again, we appreciate the assistance! Thanks!

Yep that dubious noble is a trip! This is turning into one of the best scenes in the game thus far. He's the character, Earl Dalahide, a randy "crazy uncle" type who never stops pawing young ladies in the park!

Carl and Fang despise him, Fang because he's overly protective and Carl because he's "interested" in Ariel. Really funny moments ensue as Dalahide comes and goes... (I've worked ahead.) Ariel appreciates "Dalah's" help, while the other companions fume and mutter in the background, spouting caustic comments occasionally, but she's very adroit at fending off his advances while insisting that the "lads" apologize to the earl, an older fellow. Dang, this game is turning out to be a lot more fun than reading the script indicated, even though Filler put a lot of verve into his reading, as always. The palette is beautiful. The music tracks are adequate to the story's changing moods. Can't stop humming one of 'em - driving me nuts!!

Eien, nice talking to you, and thanks again!

If you happen to run across someone who has some time and inclination, we are still hoping to find a primary translator for Super Shell Monsters-II in the near future (Daikaijyu Monogatari-II). Putting this patch together should proceed fairly quickly. Motivation is high, and the timing is good for us.


No problem. Spot translations are always fun, and Aretha looks like a neat series. I liked the interplay between the characters in the lines that I translated. :)

As for Daikaijyu Monogatari-II, you might want to post a Help Wanted ad on Romhacking.net (if you haven't yet) or PM user meikyoushisui. He posted on RHDN a few weeks ago saying he's looking for projects to translate.


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Thanks for the tip. Enjoy the holiday!

Eien Ni Hen wrote:
Wildbill wrote:
Again, we appreciate the assistance! Thanks!

Yep that dubious noble is a trip! This is turning into one of the best scenes in the game thus far. He's the character, Earl Dalahide, a randy "crazy uncle" type who never stops pawing young ladies in the park!

Carl and Fang despise him, Fang because he's overly protective and Carl because he's "interested" in Ariel. Really funny moments ensue as Dalahide comes and goes... (I've worked ahead.) Ariel appreciates "Dalah's" help, while the other companions fume and mutter in the background, spouting caustic comments occasionally, but she's very adroit at fending off his advances while insisting that the "lads" apologize to the earl, an older fellow. Dang, this game is turning out to be a lot more fun than reading the script indicated, even though Filler put a lot of verve into his reading, as always. The palette is beautiful. The music tracks are adequate to the story's changing moods. Can't stop humming one of 'em - driving me nuts!!

Eien, nice talking to you, and thanks again!

If you happen to run across someone who has some time and inclination, we are still hoping to find a primary translator for Super Shell Monsters-II in the near future (Daikaijyu Monogatari-II). Putting this patch together should proceed fairly quickly. Motivation is high, and the timing is good for us.


No problem. Spot translations are always fun, and Aretha looks like a neat series. I liked the interplay between the characters in the lines that I translated. :)

As for Daikaijyu Monogatari-II, you might want to post a Help Wanted ad on Romhacking.net (if you haven't yet) or PM user meikyoushisui. He posted on RHDN a few weeks ago saying he's looking for projects to translate.


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